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Hey again

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[ English ]
Time for another remake! :la:

The original picture was made over two years ago, I remember it was a completely random idea, and everybody liked it because of the colour scheme :giggle:

I remade it, just to see how much I have improved, and I must say I really like this x3

The original can be found here: [link]

[ Español ]
Es hora de otro remake! :la:

el dibujo original fue hecho hace mas de dos años, recuerdo que fue una idea completamente random, y a todos les gustó por el esquema de colores :giggle:

Lo volvi a hacer, solo para ver si he mejorado, y debo decir que me gustó mucho x3

El original lo pueden encontrar aqui: [link]

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:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star-empty::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I will start by saying I can definitely see a big improvement between the two. The details in the flower and the vibrant colors especially stick out to me. The sky looks much better here without the lines in the background like the older one. The post also looks less awkward.

One thing that is improved from the last drawing but could still use some work is the grass. It is good that you are no longer relying on the grass brush but the grass here is very blurry and clumped. The way you positioned it almost looks like you were having a hard time with the bottom of its body and tried to cover it up. I'm not saying you were, I'm just saying that is what the positioning of the grass implies. I say this because I have seen quite a bit of it (and have even done it myself in the past).

The shading is definitely better here than the old piece. The older one looked slightly plastic with the highlights but the shadows and highlights here look more natural.